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A NEW KELL chapter 8

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You went well in the character of Thusia, even though she's a bit more "stealth" and fights off his enemies alone when necessary as it was needed a small line with the Devil's assault P:
And good the fact for the reason why she wishes to defeat him, to free the Devils from his "possible" ironfist below them, something that she doesn't tolerate anymore in every House generally!
Plus, she wishes to ally with the Guardians too, but I don't know if there will be a pacific coexistence between the Houses if there's a successful one...here looks like the Wolves are too weak to even make one. Worse, tricks from the Devils to put against them the Guardians during these treats of peace wouldn't be acceptable for Thusia, and the House renmants, to face.
For the rest, it was enjoyable to read ^^